By Owen Grey
The
auditorium buzzed as the students turned to one another to share their
sensory memories and then to share their stories. I walked around the
auditorium a little during this exercise. The students were almost all
talking about their memories and they were almost all telling their
stories.
I noticed one girl sitting quietly. I went over to her. “What's your story?”
“Oh, I don't have one,” she said.
“You must. C'mon.”
She
insisted that she didn't. I went through some of the StoriesLive®
prompts and she still insisted that she didn't have a story.
“Oh, she's just a junior,” the boy sitting next to her said.
“You don't have to be a senior to have a story,” I said. “Fine. Help her get started. What's your story?”
He told his story. “So, how about you?” he asked me.
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Lynn Classical High School hosted StoriesLive®, a project of massmouth, from December 12th through December 16th with a school-wide Story Slam on Monday December 19th.
The program began with the StoriesLive® Assembly. English Department Head, Mr. Burke, introduced StoriesLive® and asked for the students attention. Storytellers Nicolette Heavey, Norah Dooley, Ben Cunningham, and Paula Junn took the stage to telling the story of StoriesLive® and telling their own stories.
Norah
discussed the principles of storytelling and led the students through
an exercise to explore their memories and dig up sensory details. This
was the first exercise of a week of learning about storytelling and the
oral tradition.
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What makes a good story? What makes a good performance? How does spoken word differ from the written word?
The
challenge was to teach 11 sections of senior English classes how to
answer these questions. StoriesLive® brought some interesting exercises
to help students learn about oral tradition and spoken word performance.
In one class, Andrea Lovett
taught storytelling by giving examples of her own stories from her life
as examples as she talked about the StoriesLive® prompts. She had the
students dig in their memories for sensory details again, as they had in
the assembly but pushed them to go deeper.
In another class Norah Dooley
had the students get up and walk in a big circle around the outside of
the desks. She had the students walk and embody each of the 6 universal
emotions and then stop and make a face representing that emotion to a
classmate across the room. She tied that into performance about how a
gesture or a facial expression can replace what would be a paragraph or a
page of exposition in writing.
Tony Toledo had Paula Junn and me join him in front of the class to tell one story in three parts. I took the beginning, Tony took the middle, and Paula took
the end. At the end we had the students try to guess whose story it
was. The class was about equally split between whether the story was
mine or Tony's. He asked the
students to split of into groups of three and then do the exercise
themselves. The students took the activity seriously and it was fun
watching them get up there and act out their parts.
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These
kids have powerful stories. While not everyone had the courage to
speak, everyone seemed to love hearing their friends and classmates tell
their stories. Not all of the stories were life changing but I could
see that telling their stories and listening to their classmates stories
was transformative.
One
particular story I will carry with me. I watched A—'s story evolve from
the in-class Story Slam to the school-wide Story Slam. I learned from
his story. Here's the story I heard on Friday.
One day during the summer of 2010, A— and some friends went up to 40 Steps, a part of Nahant beach. People climb a cliff at 40 Steps and jump down into the ocean. As A— and his friends approached they noticed one kid standing apart from the crowd. When they got there, A— saw it was his friend S—.
“What's going on, S—? Why haven't you jumped in?”
“I can't swim.”
A— jumped into the ocean a few times. Climbing back up to the top of the cliff, he saw that S— was still standing apart and still dry.
“Listen, S—, I got you. We'll jump in together. I won't let you go.”
S— didn't jump the first time but he did the second time. A— and S— surfaced. S— pushed A— off him. A— tried to grab S— again but then S— began doggy-paddling.
A— told his classmates how inspired he was by S—'s courage to jump and to try swimming alone.
When
A— sat down, I noticed he seemed a little choked up. I had at first
thought it was because he was remembering how brave S— had been.
As
A— was walking out, his teacher flagged him down. “Good job, A—,” she
started, “but you know the real story is what happened the week after.”
She pushed him to tell that part of the story. A— left for his next
class.
She turned to Tony
and me to explain that the week after S— had jumped from 40 Steps, S—,
A—, and some other friends went swimming in the reservoir. S— was not a
strong enough swimmer to swim the course they set. S— did not know how
to back float when his arms got too tired. S— went under. His friends
were not able to get to him in time. S— drowned.
Tony
and I both tried to tell his teacher that A—'s story of being inspired
by S—'s jump was a story itself. A— was honoring S—'s memory by telling
that part of the story. Not telling about his drowning did not diminish
what A— had told.
“I saw how choked up he got sitting at his seat after telling,” Tony said.
“A— might not be ready to tell that story yet. It's too raw. A— may not
be ready to talk about the drowning for five or ten years.”
On
Monday at the school-wide Slam, A— got up. Telling in front of the
entire senior class of some 300 is much different than telling in front
of a class of some 30 people. A— had to stop in the middle of the story.
Anyone could tell he was about to be overcome by his emotions.
The auditorium thundered with applause and calls for him to continue. The whole senior class supported A—.
A—
stumbled over his emotions but was able to finish his story. He began
to cry. After another round of applause he continued, his voice
cracking, “Listen everyone, if you know you can't do something, don't do
it. Just don't do it.” He talked about how S— drowned and how much he
missed him.
The other student storytellers who were on deck for that round opened their arms to him.
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Watching
the program, I alternated between two different lenses: that of a
storyteller and that of a graduate student in English Language Arts
education. There was some reticence on the part of the students on
Tuesday and some on Wednesday but by Friday, the day of the in-class
Story Slams, the students had largely opened up and were participating
in the slams.
There
was still some reticence at the end but for the most part the students
had overcome their fears. The in-class slams that I saw were all very
supportive. All the students cheered for one another.
I
did find one thing particularly troubling: many of the students said,
“I don't have a story.” From the girl in auditorium to students on the
day of the in-class Story Slam, there were students that insisted that
they had no stories in them.
This still puzzled me during the meeting I had with Norah Dooley and Tony Toledo
on Monday afternoon. We talked about reaching all the students. I
talked a little about differentiated instruction. I drifted in and out
of the conversation, thinking of the students who said they had no
stories. We talked about how to make the program more effective for
future years. I mentioned a discussion of the five paragraph essay I had
had with another teacher.
“We spend all this time in schools telling students to conform to certain norms and formats to pass tests and ‘succeed,’” Norah said. “We crush their voices and crush their voices and we never ask them them for genuine expression.”
Driving
home after the school-wide Story Slam and that meaning, I realized what
the students had meant. Of course they had stories. Of course things
had happened to them. What they were actually expressing was that they
did not have any confidence that their stories mattered. These students
had had their voices crushed out of them.
One
week of work with professional storytellers is not enough to help these
students undo the years and years of being told their opinions and
stories don't matter unless those opinions match the officially
sanctioned opinions.
But that one week is a start.
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The StoriesLive® Scholarship Slam for the 2011-2012 Season will be March 31, 2012 at Rabb Auditorium, Boston Public Library.
Owen Grey has been telling stories his whole life. He has found his home with massmouth and the Greater Boston storytelling community.
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Owen Grey has been telling stories his whole life. He has found his home with massmouth and the Greater Boston storytelling community.
